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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-08-22 02:49 AM


The rain drew circles in the puddles
And lines across the window glass
The footprints from two pairs of sandals
Ran through the shiny, glossy grass
Two fates have met under this shower
Two lovers chasing one another
Perhaps a sister and a brother
Or maybe strangers seeking cover
Perhaps two friends were simple lost
It doesn’t matter which it was
By destiny their paths have crossed,
Ran side-by-side and gotten close
Under the morning shower
To love and cherish one another
Just like a sister and a brother
As though two strangers seeking cover
As if two friends whose paths have crossed
To keep eternally one course
To share one beating of a heart
Preserving love a form of art


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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 08-22-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-08-22 03:59 PM


Wow, very beautiful with a nice message. It flowed beautifully....keep up the great work.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood


Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 1999-08-22 11:47 PM


THanks again, I wasn't sure of this one when I wrote it, but I guess it's ok...

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I fell in love and kept on falling

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