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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Wandering through the paths of my melancholy soul, Embracing the eternal vision of which only I know. Candlelit heaven's grace this world from overhead, The flickering light speaking volumes, yet so much unsaid. The wisdom of forever resides within the hearts of few, Through the journey of understanding that is found in no pew. To soar with the angels, one must first grow ethereal wings, And truly understand the pain that love sometimes brings. Through the wandering of my melancholy soul, I begin to realize, That through one's own self is the way to love's expanding skies. Dance within the fragrant blooming gardens of your secret dreams, And understand that the path to peace is not always as it seems. Times one must wade through forests of ignorance, poison fed with lies, But sometimes lasting happiness is hidden within a clever disguise. If you wander into the depths of your quiet, melancholy soul, You'll find your peace, the eternal vision of which I know. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I have come to expect both excellence and heartfelt emotion from you my friend. Another well done verse.  ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you very much, my friend, for your kind words.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
What can I say? You've done it again. You are truly a master with words. They just seem to jump off the page and dance around your mind. No matter which poem of yours I read I feel like I'm actually there. You have a power over your readers to make them believe anything you say. That what makes your poems so great, each one is like a seperate adventure (and I could you a little get a way about now.) ------------------ People who throw kisses are hopelessly lazy. -Bob Hope |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you very much Angel, I am deeply touched by your words about my work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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