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Sunflower Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 14Front Royal, VA, USA |
The tears come and flow Day by day, on they go So many terrible things That this world brings Tornadoes, earthquakes, and hurricanes They all cause human pains The tears come and flow Day by day, on they go All the terrible poverty Then the rich, drinking their tea It can't be right, it's just not fair All those people sick and bare The tears come and flow Day by day, on they go The crimes commited everyday Murdering people if they get in your way Robbing, stealing, ripping off Without giving a sneeze, care, or cough ~~~~~~~~~~~ Okay people's!~ I thought that you all could finish the poem! Think of something that bugs you and write about it in one stanza. Submit as many stanzas as you want. But follow my lead and write the first two lines like I did. Then have two sets of two other lines! Enjoy! ------------------ Sita aka Sunflower sunflower_sita@ hotmail.com |
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Sunflower Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 14Front Royal, VA, USA |
Hello! This is Sita...aka Sunflower...I was just wondering what was going on with my idea. I guess it kind of fell flat...oh well! =0) I'm on a writer's block! Ahh! All the poems...when I can think of them...come out sounding like ones I would've written in second grade...oh well. Anyways, I've read most of the other poems and although I didn't respond to all...I thought they were all very good! Keep up the good work! ------------------ Sita aka Sunflower sunflower_sita@ hotmail.com |
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