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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-08-19 12:55 PM


Inside your eyes a light is blazing
‘Tis not a candle you are facing
‘Tis not a sunrise which you see
It is the love that burns for me

Your hair is floating on thin air
‘Tis not the haircut that you wear
‘Tis not the wind that makes it rise
My presence makes you look this nice

Even your lips are looking great
‘Tis not the lipstick’s different shade
‘Tis not the smile that brings them bliss
Your lips are yearning for my kiss

I wonder why I am this good
‘Tis not the vitamins from food
‘Tis not the quality of clothes
I simply don’t have any flaws


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I fell in love and kept on falling

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Master
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1 posted 1999-08-20 02:19 PM


don't take this too seriously!
Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
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2 posted 1999-08-21 11:45 PM


seems like you have a healthy dose of self esteem. good for you! lol
Master
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since 1999-08-18
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3 posted 1999-08-22 02:47 AM


Thanks, a poet must have some self-esteem to believe in his own words.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Alwye
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In the space between moments
4 posted 1999-08-22 04:05 PM


nicely done.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood


Master
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since 1999-08-18
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5 posted 1999-08-22 11:46 PM


Thanks, glad you liked it.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

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