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all my poems u never saw and never will again |
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Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
i will never foget lookin into your eyes i will never forget the way i felt when you said hi i promise my lips will never lie you will always be in my heart I will never forget the look on there faces me kissing you,you kissing me that will never be forgotten at least not by me i will never forget the way i felt holding your hand those dreams of a nigth burying our toes in to the sand this is not meant as a poem this is not meant as a letter this not meant as a pik up this so much better this is meant as a promise ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A letter to Rochelle You will never belive me even if i told you the way u make me feel i dont understand it i never felt this way this feelings way to real words wont describe it actions wont eather just this next sentance will I cant stand here thinking. when all i can think about is my brothers and sisters , dieing to defend our land of israel knowing they might not live,but still going to fight Fighting with glory and passion Living there lives to there fullests I cant stand here thinking. when all i can think about is my brothers and sisters going out to kill each other every day Fighting with shame,but boddleing it up inside I cant stand here thinking well all i can think about is Of my grandparents brothers and sisters being taken into ghettos and torchured by nazis just becouse of there religion And i will not stand here thinking anymore I will go out there and fight for my ppl and will live or die with my countries glory mike sacks 4/21/99 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Looking For A Angel To Stop My Soul From Crying my heart bleeds lonly i sit in the darkness waiting for an angel to birng me light to many times it has been taken and crushed when u love someone so much u cry for etrnity the love is true only to my own heart the others just use it as a toy so i sit alone and cry _______________________________----- the adults are winning the war they have shown there power to be able to kill true love destoying those lust full hours every1 wakes to find no1 at all as i wake to find,all who are missing they gather together to prove a point while they still know there wont be a change ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ can u see write threw me???? seems every1 can u dont like my point of view u dont like mind can change u dont like the way i look at u like i can change b/c i can only love my self...love my self....hey hey hey love my self ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ she dies alone with a knife in her hand with scars all over her wrists with all the oauin she couldnt stand thoughts of her first kiss the way he broke his promises he said hed love her for life he wanted to get maried in 5 years take her away for his wife now she sees them walk hand in hand ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ when yur sad im sad like you where ur happy im happy too when i look into ur eyes my mind goes blank all this eternal bliss and i have u to thank every time i look into ur eyes i fall inlove again ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ do i change for my self or do i change for you or do i change b/c i have nothin better to do i change for love i change for life i change for hate i change for strife but i will never change for u ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dear "best friend" We used to sit together on the swings and talk.... because talkings what we did i remember those days together on the beach those days back when we were kids i always knew you were by my side you were with me good and bad side by side we stood together through out those fights we always had when you left home to goto school i was left with no one near but u will always be on my mind my friend and you can always come back here because your my best frined ------------------ I'm not a poet!!,E.A.Poe was a poet. I'm jus a person who likes to show off his writnig to ppl...but i can never call my slef a poet...its a dream not reality Mike1Sacks@aol.com |
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Ashlie693 Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 25 |
What can I say? You are a VERY talented writer!!! I especially like the 1st one!!! Keep it up! -Ashes |
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Nici Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 22Hastings, New Zealand |
I love your poems....They're awesome! You say you dream of being a poet - well I think you are one! This is my fav saying at the moment.... "All our dreams can come ture if we have the courage to pursue them!" - you're on the right track! |
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Mike1sacks Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103Bklyn ny,usa |
thanx alot |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
hello? |
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Star Fairy Junior Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 39cerritos, ca, usa |
hey mike.. i luved the change poem... i luved it so much i put it in my profile.. but dont worry i gave you the credit.. and i hope you dont mind..  thanks for the words of wisdome bud |
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Nuriphnos Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 21Philadelphia, PA USA |
Great work man! I say u r a poet and a very good one at that! Keeo up the great work. |
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