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Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-08-16 12:02 PM


I think im falling,
falling for you
im going crazy
about those things you do
You say you love me
but i cant be sure
are you just playing
or want some more?
do you love me?
i want to know
if you do
dont let me go
we'll stay together
through out the years
we'll help eachother
without sad tears


[This message has been edited by Tanya (edited 08-16-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Tanya - All Rights Reserved
Mike1sacks
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
1 posted 1999-08-16 11:21 PM


i jus wish u were my g/f
Jimmy
Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42
Oak Grove
2 posted 1999-08-17 12:58 PM


I Loved Your Poem. It Shows Alot of Heart In your Writing. I Love How You Can Say Soo Much With Soo Little Words.
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