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CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

0 posted 1999-08-13 11:37 AM

i posted this before with a different title but now i changed the poem and the title

Tie a knot,
Let my body hang.
Cut a vein,
Let my blood rain.
Load a gun,
Blow my brains.

Pop a pill.
Whatever bothers me I will kill.
I will let my own blood spill.

My blood races.
My mind it erases.

Full of shame.
No one to blame.

Should I do it?
Should I die?
Not ready to live.
Not ready to die.

What is wrong, what is right?
My mind and body are always in a fight.

Which will win?
Which will lose?
My concience in the end will choose,
between life and death.
Will this be my last breath?

As I start to fade,
I remember all the mistakes I've made,
all the bad things I did,
and all the problems I ran away from and hid.

Now that I am all but gone.
I relize that what I did was wrong.
I should have fought through my problems,
And stood high and strong.

I don't have much blood left to bleed,
My eyes role back as my suicide succeeds.

Star Fairy
Junior Member

since 1999-08-11

Posts 39
cerritos, ca, usa

1 posted 1999-08-13 10:18 PM

i dont know if anyone realized what i have been writin about.. but it was suicide cuz it was one of the "solutions" i was contemplating.. but i know now that its not.. and your poem put it into words.. and i just wanted to say you did a wonderful job.. thanx babe..

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CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

2 posted 1999-08-14 11:21 PM

thanks for the reply

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

3 posted 1999-08-17 11:04 PM

I appreciate the abundance of replies
(sarcasm!)

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

4 posted 1999-08-17 11:10 PM

some replies who be nice right about now

Nici
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 22
Hastings, New Zealand

5 posted 1999-08-17 11:27 PM

WOW!!!!!
I'm speachless........
That was really awesome!!!
Yip you had me....I was almost crying because stuff like that happens so often now a days - Its sad but true.
ITS WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good on you mate!!(Thumbs up!)

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

6 posted 1999-08-17 11:45 PM

Many thanks

Dana
New Member

since 1999-08-22

Posts 4
Ny

7 posted 1999-08-22 03:50 AM

I know how you feel. Sometimes you think everything has gone wrong, and that things will never change. But iv learned just to hang in there, and time will make everything right again. Don't take the easy way out. You just gotta learn how to live!!!

Kandi83
New Member

since 1999-08-19

Posts 4
Phoenix, Az, US

8 posted 1999-08-22 02:00 PM

I think your poem is very deep and intense and I like it a lot because of a few reasons. One, because I've been down that road, two, because it's deep and has a lot of meaning, and three I like the way you wrote it.
Hope everything works out for you in life.

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

9 posted 1999-08-22 05:11 PM

Thanx for the replies. Im glad i had an impact on some of you.

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

10 posted 1999-08-22 05:22 PM

I can say your poem sure had an impact of me, CrAyZeD. Too often this is the solution that people choose..I almost chose it myself once. Everyone who's at that point or who has once been there will appreciate your words. Good job!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

CrAyZeD
Junior Member

since 1999-08-03

Posts 45

11 posted 1999-08-22 07:16 PM

Thanx

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