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Teen Poetry #1

One day

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-08-11 10:58 PM

One day you will love me,
just as I love you.
One day you will hate me,
and won't know what to do.
One day you won't need me,
or want me to be near.
One day you won't care,
if I even shed a tear.
One day you will wonder,
how u could ever love me from the start.
One day I will die because you'll only break my heart.
But I will always love you,
even when I cry and my body is numb.
So my only hope is that one day will never come.

ShellBelle
Junior Member

since 1999-08-06

Posts 11

1 posted 1999-08-12 02:03 AM

I loved the last line! It really brought everything together!

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A friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your heart.

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

2 posted 1999-08-12 10:52 AM

Yeah, this is the style I was talking about - I knew you could do it...I read the other poem first...sorry. Maybe you were just going for a different style (paragraph) for a little variety? Liked this one too.

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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