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Ashlie693
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 25


0 posted 1999-08-11 12:31 PM


Its not that I can't live without you,
Its that I dont even want to try
I realize the mistake I made
The first time I said goodbye

We've been through so much since then
And right now I want to be where you are
I just can't seem to let this go
We've already been this far

It makes it even harder
I can't understand the reason you had
How could your love for me just disappear
God, I wish I didnt need you this bad

I dont know how this got so confusing
But I want to set it right
I love you baby, and I want you to know
You are the best thing in my life

We can make this work
Love will help us through
i just dont feel complete
unless I am next to you

Please come back to me
I want to trust the way I feel
We were meant to be
And this love we have is real

Dedicated to my ex b/f..John..who dumped me over very DUMB circumstances!!!


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Jimmy
Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42
Oak Grove
1 posted 1999-08-11 01:51 AM


i love this poem
LuvrGurl
New Member
since 1999-08-14
Posts 1
Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA
2 posted 1999-08-14 04:40 PM


This was a pretty good poem, except a lot of the lines came from a Backstreet Boys song called, "Back to Your Heart." I just thought I'd mention that.
Ashlie693
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 25

3 posted 1999-08-17 08:04 PM


I didnt know that....I dont listen to Backstreet Boys..but what lines are copied? I will change the poem...dont wanna plaguerise (however u spell it)

-Ashes

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