navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #1 » I didn't write this, it's my friend's but it's really cute.
Teen Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic I didn't write this, it's my friend's but it's really cute. Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
doritos
Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 21


0 posted 1999-08-09 04:53 AM


I see little raindrops falling
From the vast blue sky
I hear tiny birds singing
They try to please me, why?

An orchestra is playing
A beautiful song
The violins are swaying
There seems to be nothing wrong

I feel someone's coming
To take away my pain
I can't clearly see him
Though I know he's not insane.

And I know he'll surely find me
coz' I feel he's standing there
Smiling down so sweetly
Sheathing me with care

Now I can feel the wispy air
As it seeps through all my cracks,
Taking all my pain.

Finally, he's come to me
Hopefully, he'll stay
Though I know just one more day,
He'll slowly walk away.
And travel off to another dimension
Bringing with him my pain.

Now as I picture your image
Burning wildly
Walking through the lonely fields
Picking flowers for me

Dancing and crying
Both at the same time
Looking for something
That you surely cannot find

Coz I'm the one who loves you most
And no other woman does
So please come back to me now
Boy this will be both our loss.

Tiny birds beaming up with pride
Because they've pleased me enough
Now they flap their wings and fly
Boy I must be so much loved.
Lots of creatures loving me
and you're one of them too
I just wish I'll once more be
Part of the pain in you.

© Copyright 1999 doritos - All Rights Reserved
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #1 » I didn't write this, it's my friend's but it's really cute.

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary