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CrAyZeD
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since 1999-08-03
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0 posted 1999-08-08 09:19 PM


Tie a knot,
Let my body hang.
Cut a vein,
Let my blood rain.
Load a gun,
Blow my brains.

Pop a pill.
Whatever bothers me I will kill.
I will let my own blood spill.

My blood races.
My mind it erases.

Full of shame.
No one to blame.

Should I do it.
Should I die.
Not ready to live.
Not ready to die.

What is wrong, what is right.
My mind and body are always in a fight.

Which will win?
Which will lose?
My concience in the end will choose,
between life and death.
Will this be my last breath?

As I start to fade,
I remember all the mistakes I've made,
all the bad things I did,
and all the problems I ran away from and hid.



[This message has been edited by CrAyZeD (edited 08-12-99).]

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PrincessDoo
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since 1999-07-30
Posts 41
Cerritos, CA, USA
1 posted 1999-08-08 09:36 PM


how many times have i been through this ordeal?? i can not say... all i can say is that i am still alive and i have no strength to carry through... and people tell me that, that is for the best.. no strength to carry through ..that is the best.. but one day when i do have the strength... i know many people will be left wondering..

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CrAyZeD
Junior Member
since 1999-08-03
Posts 45

2 posted 1999-08-09 10:53 PM


thanks for the response

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-08-10 01:29 AM


Excellent job, I can relate to this one. Keep up the good work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

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