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Teen Poetry #1

When I fall in love

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-08-07 08:09 PM

Many times I thought I loved.
But always it turned out that my feelings where just shoved.
Once I couldn’t eat,
I couldn’t sleep,
I couldn’t even wheap.
I thought I loved him,
But it was all a dream.

Now I’ve realized what truelove really is.
Love isn’t just a couple of sweet words and a kiss.
When I fall in love,
I feel as I’ve been smitten with Cupid’s arrow from above.

When I fall in love,
My heart goes week.
My knees begin to tremble.
And as I hear him speak,
I ask myself “Is love a gamble?”

Now you’ve come along in my life.
And I’m afraid to fall in love.
Your words are sweet.
Your kiss is even sweeter.
You say that what we have is true.
But I’m afraid to fall in love with you.

I don’t want to go through the same thing again.
I’ve had to so many times,
And it all turned out to be lies.
Because when I fall in love,
I’m not only in heaven above,
I’m in hell paying for his so caled love.

Misty
Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 121
USA

1 posted 1999-08-07 09:10 PM

I just love your last paragraph! It's a great one!

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©Misty

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

2 posted 1999-08-07 09:48 PM

Thanx, 4 sum reason not many ppl can understand wut it means lol

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 1999-08-07 11:24 PM

if u could please post ur replies on thins 1
Thanx

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