i'd like sum comments on this pleaz

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i'd like sum comments on this pleaz

Squirly
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since 1999-08-06

Posts 3
Beaverton, Oregon, USA

0 posted 1999-08-07 07:47 AM

-I love you-

I love you more than words can say,
I love you more and more each day

These feelings that I have for you
Are stronger than I ever knew

When I close my eyes all I can see
Is you kissing and holding me

I wish that we weren't so far apart
I yearn for you and it breaks my heart

Although, someday I know we'll meet
Us together just like I've always dreamed
And when that day comes it will be so neat

But for now, I will wait
I'll wait as long as it takes

As long as we end up together
I can sit here and wait forever

And this I want you to know
From the bottom of my heart
where it sits and grows

More than anything in the world
More than anything I've ever known

I love you and I always will

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