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SmityGrl
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since 1999-08-03
Posts 1
White Lake Michigan

0 posted 1999-08-03 02:09 AM


You know I love you
I just wish that you cared

You said you loved me two
But life just isn't fair

You left me in a hurry
You didn't listen to what I said

Now I lie here alone
Crying in my bed

I miss the touch of your hands
and the way we used to kiss

I wish we were together
I wish you didn't feel like this

I wish the pain would go away
and the memories be erased

Another day without you
Alone can not be faced

Please come back to me
I know you want to too

Cause without you here beside me
I no longer know what to do

© Copyright 1999 SmityGrl - All Rights Reserved
Mike1sacks
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
1 posted 1999-08-03 05:01 AM


i love that poem but seriously dont let someone controll ur life like that i know exactly how u feel,but ur jus hopwin them tjhat they are betterr then u

in all truth if a girl wrote that to me i'd be scared away fromn her

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