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doritos
Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 21


0 posted 1999-07-31 04:47 AM


Her first dance
His first love.

A circle that
binds them together.

Her first love
His first dance.

Together.

© Copyright 1999 doritos - All Rights Reserved
Mike1sacks
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
1 posted 1999-07-31 04:31 PM


all i can say is WoW,best I"ve read yet
Black Rain
Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 60
California, USA
2 posted 1999-08-01 09:02 PM


I LOVE IT!
Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
3 posted 1999-08-01 09:57 PM


That was amazing .
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