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nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

0 posted 1999-07-30 01:25 AM


Cold be the night,
warm be the day.
When I think of you I shiver,
never will those thoughts go away.

Blessed be the day,
and darkness be the night.
I am sad and lonely,
still you're out of sight.

Presence has it's dawn,
absence has it's dusk.
Never again should you
hold my trust.

Fulfillment in the sun,
Loneliness in the moon.
Here I sit alone,
in my solitude and gloom.

Frowns in the moon,
Smiles in the rays.
Whatever would i do
just to make you stay.

Wind whispers softly,
while rain drops a tear.
Forever I shall stay,
living all alone in fear.

© Copyright 1999 nicnac8 - All Rights Reserved
Kiya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31
Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S.
1 posted 1999-07-30 01:52 AM


That was very beautifully written, It was sad but beautiful. It had a very good rhythym to it. You write wonderfully.

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Kiya Nicole



nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA
2 posted 1999-07-30 02:44 AM


I'm glad u liked it. Thanx for taking the time out to read it.

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