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JellyBean
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 24
Durham, CA 95938

0 posted 1999-07-29 04:43 PM


Unsaid

To my sweet,
all the things I never said.
All those little things,
that filled my heart with dread.
I was never able to tell you,
all the emotions that I felt.
All the feelings that I held inside,
those with which I had dealt.
The longing on those cold nights,
to have your arms around me tight.
And to see your tender eyes,
the ones I love and are my prize.
The kiss from your gentle lips,
oh, the thing I made myself miss!
Your loving caress, ...
I swear I tried my best.
Those words I could not form,
those words I keep with such regret,
still linger in my throat
simply unable to form,
but I don’t fret.
I know that somewhere,
somewhere deep inside,
my heart has met with yours,
and they cling together with uttermost pride.

© Copyright 1999 Laurie York - All Rights Reserved
Sweet T
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa
1 posted 1999-07-29 06:31 PM


Very well written. Keep up the fantastic work.
JellyBean
Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 24
Durham, CA 95938
2 posted 1999-07-30 10:40 AM


Thanks, Sweet T.
nicnac8
Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA
3 posted 1999-07-31 03:58 AM


i really enjoyed this poem because it was will written and it reminds me of myself. I never told my X-boyfriend how much i really cared for him , I was too afraid that he didn't feel the same way. If ur still with this person i'd advise u to tell him how u feel b4 it's too late.
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Nika

JellyBean
Junior Member
since 1999-07-29
Posts 24
Durham, CA 95938
4 posted 1999-07-31 09:28 PM


Thanx 4 your advice Nika. I'll follow.

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