The Night He Took My Jewel

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Teen Poetry #1

The Night He Took My Jewel

nicnac8
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

0 posted 1999-07-28 06:47 PM

The night he took my jewel
i was just a little girl.
I had absolutely no knowledge of the world.

I screamed and shouted all night,
I'd never been so frightened.
I can't believe this,
he told me to keep it a secret.

That night I went hom crying,
I was so afraid that I ended up lying.

I told my mom that I fell,
I hope this bastard burns in hell.

He took my jewel-
I can't believe I knew him.
It was my uncle,
what could i do?

No one would believe me.
I have to live with it
for the rest of my life.

What he did was so cruel.
I still remember that
horrible night-
The night he took my jewel.

Aprender
Junior Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA

1 posted 1999-07-28 08:00 PM

oh my God....the poem is great, but your situation is horrible!! That must be really terrible.. i hope you're okay?

nicnac8
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 46
New York, N.Y. USA

2 posted 1999-07-28 10:58 PM

this poem was written for all of those who have ever been in a situation similar to this one, luckily i've never been in that situation.

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

3 posted 1999-08-01 04:58 AM

Wow,i cant relate but i know where ur comin form

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

4 posted 1999-08-01 10:02 AM

Too many friends went through exactly what this describes. Well done.

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