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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
The weeks pass so quickly by Without a word my silence stretches. I sit lonlier than I ever was Before I loved you, for now I have the memories that used to Fill my empty and cold spaces, but All they do is sit restlessly in my heart And cry with me. I wish I had a dream to fulfill this Yearning in my soul to be free of The things that haunt me, still I know I'll always have an emptiness That no one can fill, And emptiness made by few I trusted Or by my myself, I no longer care My hours are filled with bitter nothings That cry with me. I loved you with everything I had, But we got distracted somehow- I miss you with all of me, and I want you back with a passion unknown to me And this feeling I've come to know so well That looks up at me from my pillow at night That comforts me in the cold light That fills me when you can't Crys with me. You're all of everything I ever wanted- And at the end of this, I'll remember what I loved about you I'll carry the memories that made me smile In my darkest moments, when the world was asleep And it was only me, alone, left to weep And the sadness was too deep I dreamed you came and made the darkness Disappear- But now my dreams hold pain That alone I cannot face With you beside me I learned to love. Those feelings, now ashes, are still inside And in my solitude They cry with me. ------------------ Leslie Rhiannon Oliver |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
today I feel like I belong in your writing. You show so much what I feel. Love is a wonderful thing that has happened to me in such a wonderful way. Yet today it was shaken once more. I hope that you are able to express this well always. YOu are a wonderful writer with a passion that shows in your work. ------------------ ~People who think that love is somthing made up in our head, well they are the ones that we can be sure, have NEVER fallen in love~ |
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nicnac8 Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46New York, N.Y. USA |
That poem was beautiful. It reminds me of my old boyfriend.I still think of him sometimes.Cool poem!!!!!1 |
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Tanya Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Wow that reminded me so much of what i had. It touched me so much that i almost started crying. It is really beautiful. <333Tanya<333 |
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Poetboy96 Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 12 |
You are the one I have to thank for showing me this place. I thank you. I also thank you for sharing your words w/ me. Poetboy John W. Hedglin www.johnspoetry.com |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
how sad..truly touching though. Im not sure if you're still a member because this is really old. but i just wanted to reply  *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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