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Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-07-28 06:19 AM


With my hearts love doors open wide,
Giving all with nothing to hide.
I lay my love to those who "need",
But just to make, my love doors bleed.

I care for all, who for me?
are you out there? Can you see?
I am a girl, not a machine,
Just a big heart, just pure and clean.

many times I've been knocked down
My heart jabbed again I frown…
Never have I just turned my care off,
thinking Id find, my “friend” too soft

Im a hurt girl, deep within
tears streamin fast down my chin
many times my heart has been stabbed
now the hurts are carefully tabbed

Slowly my hearts love doors close
None in it, so none to doze
I know I will be set for pain
Plenty to lose.. but none to gain


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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-28 08:29 AM


Little Sister, I tell you that I'm proud of you? You did well putting this pain down.

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



Gentle Soul
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 273
Vinton,Ohio USA
2 posted 1999-07-28 03:16 PM


thank you brother

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