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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-07-27 05:18 AM


DARKEND by something strange
but not as cold as ICE
Twirling LIKE smoke from insence
Weightless and MINDLESS
Free like a COOL, night breeze
on green grass meadows
SWAYING but still
with eyes like a dolls'
Mourning my lost sence of FREEDOM
Oh, my aching head
and my BURNING heart
My SOUL is singing,
can you hear her?
Maybe she'll SING louder
Or maybe she'll fall SILENT
Who CAN taste the rain
when it is not FALLING?
Is it the GIFTED or the DAMNED?

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Local Parasite
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since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg
1 posted 2002-10-04 02:15 PM


Whoa, lighten up on the caps, girl... you're hurting my eyes.  

I guess this poem is a good way to see where you came from, and just how far you've come by today, three years later...

Nice work, Jaime.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

quietlydying
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since 2001-06-10
Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz
2 posted 2002-11-01 02:57 AM


just cruising through the archives.

it's neat to see your work three years ago.

i don't even like to think of mine.  :: shudders ::

you've come a long way baby, but you've always had that flare.

:: grins ::

/jen/


what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (11-01-2002 02:58 AM).]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-13 07:49 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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