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i have no title,help me find 1

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

0 posted 1999-07-26 03:02 AM

looking for an angel to stop my soul from cryin
my heart bleeds
lonly i sit in the darkness,waiting for my angel to bring me light
to many times it has been taken and crushed
the love is true only to my own heart
the ohers jus use it as a toy
so i sit aloan and cry

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Mike1Sacks@aol.com

Addie Anne
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 46
norman, oklahoma- usa

1 posted 1999-07-26 08:39 AM

i have a suggestion for the title....
"the angels let me cry", or
"stolen light"! i liked the poem, short and simple, wish i could say sweet but it's not a very lively topic. it hurts to be alone, i know that feeling too well. email me sometime if you'd like to:-)
have a great big happy day,
addie

Sweet T
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 64
mesa, arizona maricopa

2 posted 1999-07-26 02:25 PM

Lost Soals crying

Princess Lily
Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

3 posted 1999-07-29 12:59 PM

First of all--Title suggestion:Crying Soul
Second-If i found a guy like you-I would definately be his angel

E-Mail me sometime

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*

[This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-29-99).]

Kiya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 31
Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S.

4 posted 1999-07-29 01:23 AM

I know that this may sound a little corny but I think "Toy Love" would be a cool title. I mean its your poem so it really doesn't matter. I hope you find your "angel". I'm sure she's looking for you.

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