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Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-07-26 12:40 PM


How much I wanna be with you
You dont understand
How much I want you to hold my hand
I miss you so much, I can’t explain
I also can not bare this pain
I wanna be in your arms
I wanna be just with you
As long as we are together
I dont care what we are doing
As long as there are only us two
I think about you every nite and day
And all the thoughts will never go away
I love being in your arms and kissing you
It’s the only thing I really love to do
I wish you’d be with me right now
So I wont have to wonder about things
Like if or how

[This message has been edited by Tanya (edited 07-31-99).]

[This message has been edited by Tanya (edited 08-02-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Tanya - All Rights Reserved
Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
1 posted 1999-07-26 01:21 AM


Tanichka, who is that poem dedicated 2?
Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
2 posted 1999-07-26 11:38 PM


no one anymore
earthangel
Junior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 10

3 posted 1999-07-27 06:15 PM


i feel your need...my baby's away and all i want is for him to know that i love him and that we should be together.
Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
4 posted 1999-08-02 12:58 PM


CAN YOU GUYS COMMENT ON THIS 1? I WANNA HEAR WHAT U GOT TO SAY ABOUT IT.
<333TANYA<333


Misty
Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA
5 posted 1999-08-02 05:34 PM


This is a great poem very meaningful,
I know how you feel!

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©Misty

AudreyBlue
New Member
since 1999-08-02
Posts 7
Moncton, N.B., Canada
6 posted 1999-08-03 11:39 PM


Tanya... I think your poem really describes the feeling of wanting to be with somebody.I really liked it.

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"I want to be alone away from love..."

Mike1sacks
Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa
7 posted 1999-08-04 04:23 PM


i wish i had g/f that cared this much bout me,and felt this way

Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
8 posted 1999-08-04 04:37 PM


I really loved your poem and know just what it's like to want them so bad. It physically aches, as funny as that sounds. Oh, mike, well you know that there are a million girls here who would go for you. Totally faithful and excedingly sweet girls. Keep up the good work tanya

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~depression is not a sickness of the body or mind, but of the heart. When the heart feels alone and afraid~
Maitay Mirabel Litton

Tanya
Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA
9 posted 1999-08-04 11:40 PM


Thanx guys!
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