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Wet
Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 1999-07-25 05:27 PM


Death till We Part

Death till we part
Across the glowing
Valleys of heaven
I am the only one walking these
Death Valley Coffins

Shall we all disappear
Without a trace of fear
We all fall apart
We lose everything
Love, fear, anger
It's just not there...

Do we not care
Although we dare
Vivid imaginations
It is only left that we
Die.... All alone....

Death till We Part??
Or is it just your
Imagination???

© Copyright 1999 David Danielson - All Rights Reserved
Acid Angel
Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 17
Austin, TX, US
1 posted 1999-07-25 07:21 PM


I love your poem, i feel like you know whats going on inside my head..
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