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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

0 posted 1999-07-24 04:51 AM

sound of your voice
the way it makes me feel
the thought of a tender kiss
closing with a seal
Every single night i dream of you
every day in class the same
but then again i truthfully i doubt
u even know my name
to u i am a stranger
someone u even knew
to me you are a beauty
someone my heart consumed
I just wish 1 day I'd have a chance
i know i never will
to take your hand hold it tight
and swallow all those pills
as i sit here and i cry
knowing i have no chance
just 1 date with you
to take you to a dance
i know i dot like dancing
i know you lug i too
but truthfully I'll do anything 4 u

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Mike1Sacks@aol.com

Ashley Lawrence
Junior Member

since 1999-07-21

Posts 13
Bloomindale, IL US

1 posted 1999-07-25 04:24 PM

That's a really sweet poem.
I have written many poems like that, I bet she knows your name. Be outgoing, and see if she does know you name.

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~ashley~
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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

2 posted 1999-07-26 01:02 AM

Thanx but that poem was written a while back now im 15 i worte that at 13,i been wit dat girl for 2 and a hlaf years

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

3 posted 1999-07-26 01:17 AM

aww that is soo sweet,, II feel ur pain, i went through the same thing many times,dont worry all you need 2 do is say something to her so that she relizes how u feel trust me!!!

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

4 posted 1999-07-26 02:08 AM

Right now the girl im with...took my virganity,ahe means so muc to me but i dont want to tell her i love her till im 100% sure

Princess Lily
Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

5 posted 1999-07-29 01:13 AM

How long have you been with her??
You rwork is wonderful!~Lily

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*A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive*

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

6 posted 1999-07-30 02:05 AM

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

7 posted 1999-07-30 01:34 PM

thanx

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

8 posted 1999-07-31 01:35 AM

the poem is very nice and its really sweet that since ten you have been going out with her.
by the way what school are you in?
<333Tanya<333

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

9 posted 1999-07-31 04:33 PM

thanx

Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

10 posted 1999-08-02 08:34 PM

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Mike1sacks
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 103
Bklyn ny,usa

11 posted 1999-08-06 04:20 PM

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Starr_Scott
Junior Member

since 1999-08-06

Posts 26
Brownwood, Texas, USA

12 posted 1999-08-06 04:32 PM

You've been with the girl for two and 1/2 years and your not sure?
Ok?
I guess your waiting for the right time to tell her but anyways great poem.
I was in the same situation but now that the guy knows I like him it's been torture.
I get weak in the knees and I'm at a loss of words, but I guess that's what the teenage years were made for.
Well your fortunate to have her. Anyways keep up the great poetry, we need more poems like this.

Starr_Scott

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