Falling Away,till Theres Nothing There at All

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Teen Poetry #1

Falling Away,till Theres Nothing There at All

heaven_0401
Junior Member

since 1999-07-12

Posts 19
Australia

0 posted 1999-07-22 11:10 PM

The brillant darkness
Occupies the holes
As the colourful lively
ocean explodes

You cry and violently through your head
in shame
And muffle
"I'm the only one to blame"

The sky thunders
with terrifying pain
and you reliase
"You feel just the same"

The roses
that lie beneath your
heart

Were once innocent and beautiful
Each petal portryaing its on part

YOu were once like that
Til the heart ached too much
Til the once passionate petals
Turned into nothing but useles
dust
Never again to be filled with
the sweet smell of lust

The waves keep on breaking
Succumbing to the golden shore
As you continue to fall

Until theres nothing
Nothing
There at all

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please post your opinons
love heaven

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-22 11:12 PM

Again, Heaven, very nice work.

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