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Nuriphnos
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since 1999-07-18
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Philadelphia, PA USA

0 posted 1999-07-22 07:37 PM


When you’re In Love


“When in love, one must realize,
What can be felt by gazing in her eyes.”
How do you know when you’re in love?
You’ll know when that one person is the only one you think of.
When ever you are with them, your troubles are left behind,
When you go to sleep at night, they’re the last thought on your mind.
How they always keep their promises they make,
How they’re the first thought in your mind when you wake.
When ever trouble is lurking near,
They’re the one to comfort your fear.
When ever you need someone to hold you close,
They’re the one you think of most.
How everything is alright with just a kiss,
They’ll make you feel happy in eternal bliss.
How when ever they’re near everything is alright,
And ever since you met, you never had a sleepless night.
How their words always seem to touch your heart,
How you miss them like crazy, whenever you’re apart.
How they can’t stand to see you cry,
How they call you up, just to say hi.
How they always go out of their way,
Just to pick the right present for your birthday.
How you miss them when you’re alone.
How you can converse with them over the phone.
How their voice is such a sweet sound,
How they make you feel when ever they’re around.
How you trust them with everything they do,
Cuz anywhere they go, you know they’re thinkin about you.
How they tell you their love would never end,
How they show you love, infront of all their friends.
How you know you’re their only one,
How to them, you’re second to none.
How you think of them every second of every minute of every hour,
How they always surprise you with candy and flowers.
How they say, of you they always think,
How they know your favorite colors are white, blue, and even pink.
How you know their love would never stop,
How they know you own like 50 million tank tops.
How this poem is keeping you quiet for awhile,
How they don’t care as long as you smile.
How they always prefer, with you to walk,
How they make fun of the way you talk.
How with them, your days and night are never blue,
How they end this very long poem,
By thinking of you.

L,L,L,L>Nuriphnos
Live, Love, & Let love.

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Nuriphnos
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 21
Philadelphia, PA USA
1 posted 1999-07-22 07:40 PM


Sorry peeps if this is too long, but there is just so many ways to know. And this is dedicated to a special girl. Do u still wonder how I feel for u?
Ashley2405
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170
2 posted 1999-07-22 10:39 PM


that was the sweetest poem! and it is so true i feel that way about my baby, the one i have so many poems in here about~Dempsey! it expresses exactly how i feel around him. that was a beautiful poem.

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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-07-22 11:54 PM


so incredibly true...a wonderful job!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

Nuriphnos
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 21
Philadelphia, PA USA
4 posted 1999-07-23 05:13 AM


Thanx again ASH is I luv ur poems too. I guess its because we both think the same. haha. "Great minds, think alike." And thank you too Alwye, its always great to know ur poems are felt.
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