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Teen Poetry #1

Poison

VelvetLuna
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 10
Canada

0 posted 1999-07-22 01:23 AM

Quick, occasional deadly glances
captured into realm of unconsciousness
prolonging the loss of speech
Deliberately avoiding brunet eyes
committing an eagerly sin
luring painridden hearts to hope
Give away my soul
just to destroy the mind
and loose control of senses
Touch and taste is all a dream
surrounded by dark-filled warmth
wishing a piece be part of I
Want is deep but uncertain
as unconditional, infinite waits
endure, release, continue
to bleed this poisonous desire.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-23 02:13 AM

I've read a few of your poems, and you sure have some talent. Keep up the great work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

Acid Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 17
Austin, TX, US

2 posted 1999-07-25 07:47 PM

Your poem is a great eye catcher, really good use of words..it lets ones imagination think hard for once..I congratulate you with your good talent. I love it.

*Acid Angel

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