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Jimmy
Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42
Oak Grove

0 posted 1999-07-22 12:07 PM


No matter how many fights we get in, no matter how bad they are,
I will never allow us to go away very far.
I don't care if someone gets between the two of us,
As long as your there, when it comes down to trust.
No matter how far apart we may roam,
When one is lost, they can come to the others home.
No matter what it takes to be around,
I would roam forever, untill it was you I found.
When two friends are together, its just so magically to see,
The unleashing of power a friendship can be.
True friends are together even when the others not alive,
There together, as one to strive.
No matter if we are torn apart,
I am always here to give you a start.
I will forever be there to get you through,
Never forget......I Will Always Remember You!

-Jimmy-

© Copyright 1999 Jimmy VanNatta - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-07-22 12:43 PM


very sweet and well written.

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

Jimmy
Junior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 42
Oak Grove
2 posted 1999-07-22 01:44 AM


Thank you for your replay.
I wrote this one to the girl of my dreams, which has slipped from my reach.
I have wrote her soo many poems, I have just started posted them. Please read my other two that i have posted.
Cheated and,
Why Does Love Hurt So Bad?
Thank You.
-Jimmy-


Acid Angel
Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 17
Austin, TX, US
3 posted 1999-07-25 08:05 PM


I love this poem.. is very good and guessing by the words used special..your right friendship is true and special...I like your other poems as well, you have talent..

"if you love her go for it"

*Acid Angel

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