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Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
Open up your eyes to see the world around you Open up your eyes to see what surrounds you Open up your eyes to see the beauty in life Open up your eyes to see how lucky you are to be alive. Look around yourself and notice the less fortunate than you Look around yourself and notice that they're alive, too. Life isn't easy for everyone Life is a game that just can't be won Just try to manage, day by day Just try to understand that life isn't fair in any way. Smile at people you don't know Smile at the world as through life you go Listen to advice that others give to you If you listen hard enough you might just learn something new. ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({* |
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murf1_00 Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20 |
Thats something alot of people cant deal with is that life is not fair. For me that part your poem really standss out and grabbed me.  |
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