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neunagirl
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 7
Belton, MO U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-07-20 03:46 AM


I can't love you now but I can't let you go.
I won't kiss you but we can't be alone.
I want you in my bed, no one can do what you do.
But no one would ever be as untrue to me as you.
So I sit and think of you every day.
But I can't pick up the phone, no way.
It's time to say goodbye.
I don't have time to listen to your lies.
But no one can make me feel the way you can.
I loved just to feel the gental touch of your hands.
I love you and you know that I do.
But can you say that you ever loved me too...
Didn't think so,
That's really why I'm letting you go.
I can't love you knowing you don't love me.
I guess now I can see that if you ever loved me I would wake up and it would all be a dream.

© Copyright 1999 neunagirl - All Rights Reserved
LucidLore
New Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 4
Southern CA
1 posted 1999-07-20 01:00 PM


This is great poetry.. Definetly a lot of feeling behind it... I have definetly been there... Good Job!


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Lucid Lore
"For Every Love Letter That Is Written, There Is Another One Burnt"

Nuriphnos
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 21
Philadelphia, PA USA
2 posted 1999-07-20 09:24 PM


I liked it very much. I know how it feels to be in a relationship where u r the only one giving the luv. Nice deep poem. It explained ur heart.

L.L.L.L>Cole
(Live, Love, & Let Love.)

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