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Ashley2405
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170

0 posted 1999-07-20 12:54 PM


I thought I'd never find someone
As perfect for me as you are
But now that I finally have
I don't want to let you go far.

I can't stand to be without you
For an hour, let alone twenty-four
I pace the floors seeing your face
And I just can't take it anymore!

I want to hold you
And never let you go
But the words I hear inside my head
Just won't come out to let you know.

I don't know just what it is
About you that I love
Maybe it's that you're so sweet--
Whatever it is, you were sent to me from above.

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murf1_00
Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20

1 posted 1999-07-20 05:31 PM


Short sweet and to the point. I think everyone feels this way sometime. Afraid that if they are gone to long they wont make it. Just wantin to be with the one they love I know I do. Keep up your great work.
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