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Ashley2405
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170

0 posted 1999-07-20 12:26 PM


As we're walking through the sand
He's whispering into my ear
We're only holding hands
But that's perfect now and here.

We run through the foam on the beach
Dodging scattering little sea-things
We look into the star-filled sky
And we listen as the sea sings.

Our eyes lock instantly
His lips now touching mine
We're standing there, all alone
And we forget about the time.

We're the only ones who exist right now
Throughout this world of hate
And before we part at the night's end
We realize our fate.

We're destined to be together
No matter what the consequence
And we love eachother for our souls
Not our outer appearance.



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murf1_00
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 20

1 posted 1999-07-20 05:38 PM


Oh my what feeling you portray. As always another fine poem. It seems so real like the reader is actually there. Im sure everyone that reads this will wish that someday they get to experience this feeling.
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