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heaven_0401
Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 19
Australia

0 posted 1999-07-19 10:56 PM


he only sees what he want's to see
He closes his eyes to what he soesn't
He secretely wishes his world was different

His lies have become his world
He knows the truth only hurts

He screams silently
Hoping, someone will rescue him
No ones listening
No ones caring

He fights back his tears
As he pressures a smile on his face
He thinks
"The same as always"

He goes on living a liE
pRAYING THE truth will never come out
He couldn't try and be himself
It would hurt more than the lies

He knows its wrong
But it hurts
Everything hurts

He thinks of his dreams
Then remembers he threw them far away
His dreams were all he had

Now he has nothing
He wonders
Why he bothers trying

When nothings changing
When its inevitable
That he's never going to be
Never going to be
Anything
or
Anyone

What went wrong
He doesn't know
Hes screaming and crying so hard inside

As he sits smiling and laughing
If anyone could see
How it was
How he felt
Would it change

Could anyone see that deep
He doubts
NO-ONES seeing; what it is
NO-ONES listening; for his silent cries
No-one knows what went wrong
No-one cares
NO-ONES TRYING TO STOP OT

nothing is ever going to change
Will it alwasy be the same?
He doesn't want anyone to reach him
Hes going to keep on falling

Whou could understand
Who would catch him
NO-0NE

THE TRUTH HURTS
AND
TIME COULD NEVER HEAL THE PAIN OF
BEING HIMSELF
he solemly thinks
as he holds the gun to his head

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please post what you think


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jjsweets
Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 18
albion,MI,usa
1 posted 1999-07-19 11:34 PM


well, it is good i think, kind of long and repetive, but good i think...keep going...

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