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Black Rain
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 60
California, USA

0 posted 1999-07-19 06:35 PM


My heart's in the clouds, far up above.
My heart's in the clouds and its sick of this game of love.
It's sick of being stomped on, and sick of feeling blue.
It's sick of being lonely and being torn in two.

It wants to be happy, never stressed or feel left out.
It wants to be carefree, never thrown or tossed about.

It wishes we could get along without the pain and guile.
You shouldn't give up the one you love, to make somebody smile.

My heart's in the clouds, far up above.
My heart's in the clouds and its sick of this game of love.
It's sick of being stomped on, and sick of feeling blue.
It's sick of being lonely, and being torn in two.

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murf1_00
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 20

1 posted 1999-07-19 07:12 PM


Very good. I think everyone feels this way at sometime.Some worse than others. You capture this emotion in a great way.
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