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Ashley2405
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 28
West Columbia, South Carolina 29170

0 posted 1999-07-18 11:31 PM


I think one of the greatest feelings you will ever experience in your entire life is the mutual feeling of love. It's something that leaves you in pain whenever you're not with that one person, but with that indescribable, great feeling when you do see him. Just the slightest touch of his hand upon yours leaves you with goosebumps. The feeling of his arms wrapped around you leaves you feeling safe, as if you could stay there forever. The way he looks at you when those big green eyes of his that makes your heart race and makes you melt. Just the sound of his voice can take you out of hell and make you grin. He is the one you've been hoping to find for your whole life, the one you've been waiting for. He was there that morning that you came home from the beach, you woke up to see his face and it brightened up your day. Every minute you're not with him feels like forever in hell but every second you're with him feels like an eternity in heaven. He is a gift from above, and you will love him forever, no matter what happens.

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jjsweets
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 18
albion,MI,usa
1 posted 1999-07-19 12:10 PM


so cool...i see you have a lot to say...but an excellent way of saying it.

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murf1_00
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since 1999-07-19
Posts 20

2 posted 1999-07-19 03:45 AM


once again I find myself reading your great work. Those are all the feelings you feel right there. These emtions in the human body and mind are so complicated yet you put them there so easily. Got anymore poems? Keep up the great work.
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