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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183
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A window to the soul Is what I desire An open closed Wide shut Free Way into my heart. |
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Acid Angel Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 17Austin, TX, US |
I liked it very much, its good and expressive, short, and to the point. |
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Sweet T Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 64mesa, arizona maricopa |
Show me the Way |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Wonderful.If you were looking for a title:Window to the soul(perhaps)  ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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Kiya Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 31Kingston Springs,Tn.,U.S. |
Maybe "Open desire" would work. I really like your poem. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beatiful...I like the suggestions for names already given, but choose something that you think fits well. What is your general feeling? How does it make you feel? Thats how I choose some of my titles, it may or may not help you. Anyway, good job! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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