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My Little Secret
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My Little Secret |
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Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
I have a little secret That I've never told a soul It belongs to me Something no one else can hold It's one thing that gets me through My loveless days and nights I repeat it to myself sometimes And clutch my pillow tight I look out at the stars and moon And wish there was someone to tell I really want to free my secret And break away from my shell I want someone to hold me And love me for all his life I want someone to love me And relieve me of all this strife The pain of seeing happy couples Probably just jealousy But the way they look at eachother Is the way I want someone to look at me I guess good things come to those who wait But I've been waiting way too long I just hope my little secret Will help me to stay strong ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({ |
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murf1_00 Junior Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 20 |
I love your poems they all touch me and I can relate. I to sometimes wish and long for someone to care. This poem just brngs up such emotion I thought I'd let you know its very touching.  |
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jjsweets Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 18albion,MI,usa |
so cool, touching, and moving...nice piece ash...feel free to email me, i have another cool poem kind of like that one ------------------ * s.w.e.e.t.s * |
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Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
thanks, it's good to hear some positive input!! actually, i finally did find someone! so this poem is kind of old. i'm very happy with him, thank god for him! ok sorry getting kind of emotional there! anyways, thanks again! ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({ |
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LucidLore New Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 4Southern CA |
Ashley.. Once again... you have a great talent to express your self... I feel a lot of emotion when I read your works... Keep Writing... ------------------ === Lucid Lore "For Every Love Letter That Is Written, There Is Another One Burnt" |
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