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Robert
Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 20
sunrise,fl,usa

0 posted 1999-07-16 11:20 PM


you know you've tried, but cant go on,
over the edge of a world gone wrong,
showing signs like a cry for help,
ignored by friends you destroy yourself,
sick of this life in my wasted world,
try to stop me this time,
invisible wings to help me fly,
denied abused and ripped apart,
displaying anger through poems and art,
darkness: like a second self,
neon signs read(cry for help)
a bullet is bigger than my will to live,
left without advice to give,
so i stand on the ledge with butterflies,
knowing it's not my time,
look to the bottom before i jump,
cant but wonder why,
sick ness of the mind: heart and soul,
holding in tears, cant let go,
just an attempted suicide,
low self esteem and lack of pride,
bigger the world, the deeper i plunder,
labeled marble, im buried under,
wish i knew you when you gave a damn,
falling star turned pentagram,
bitterness turned evil, between love/hate,
how much more can one take

PROSAC

© Copyright 1999 Robert - All Rights Reserved
r.t.
New Member
since 1999-07-05
Posts 6
Chicago
1 posted 1999-07-16 11:51 PM


i like your poem, yet i hope your'e really not feeling like that... it sux cause i know if you are..how you feel...e-mail me if you want to talk....
Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
2 posted 1999-07-17 12:52 PM


That was a really great poem. But I hope you really aren't feeling like that either. E-mail me any time if you want to talk or anything.
Robert
Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 20
sunrise,fl,usa
3 posted 1999-07-17 01:30 PM


i really just write poems to express how im feeling at the time but i got over that depression.. but thank you for reading my poem.
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