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Teen Poetry #1

To You My Friends...

MysticWizard
Junior Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 14

0 posted 1999-07-16 08:40 PM

To you my friends,
I say goodbye.
For I am about to wither and die.
For my heart was shattered,
by love so true,
That i cant stand to be around you.
I will fall to the ground...
and there I will lay,
As I wait till the day,
for my broken heart to mend.

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-11-14 10:30 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

mandamaywhoviay
Junior Member

since 2009-01-02

Posts 12

2 posted 2009-01-02 11:35 AM

Wow that was really sad.
Very well written though, I like the tone of it.

Zaineb
Junior Member

since 2009-05-22

Posts 27
Denmark

3 posted 2009-05-22 10:06 AM

pretty good, it sounds really good, and it say alot, and it is good that you have made it so short, but still with so many feeling that it is hard to ignore it.

kjsd
Member

since 2010-01-07

Posts 74
sd usa

4 posted 2010-01-10 04:38 PM

i fell u have had my heart brooken

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