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nikki1421
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since 07-15-99
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0 posted 07-16-99 11:54 AM       View Profile for nikki1421   Email nikki1421   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nikki1421

It was night
The sky was blue
The wind was howling
And the moon was new

I had heard the sirens earlier that say
The sound gives me goosebumps
I pray that everyone will be safe from harm
I kneel down and begin to pray

I had no clue
While I was busy at work
The ambulence was at his house
We thought It was just the flu

But we were wrong
And now i can't sleep or eat
My best friend taken from me
And all I have are memories from now on
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Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
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Realm of Supernatural


1 posted 11-15-2007 03:54 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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mandamaywhoviay
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since 01-02-2009
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2 posted 01-02-2009 11:34 AM       View Profile for mandamaywhoviay   Email mandamaywhoviay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mandamaywhoviay

Aw that's so sad!
That poem really gave off a tone to it and it was a good one.
It's good that you used some of those feelings, even if they really hurt, to make art like you did.
Zaineb
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Denmark


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That is soo sad ): i can really feel the pain, and the reader can not ignore it. it is soo good and it say much about the feeling of how it is to lose a friend
I really enjoy it  
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