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Just a Game of Pretend

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nikki1421
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0 posted 07-16-99 11:10 AM       View Profile for nikki1421   Email nikki1421   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nikki1421

I lie awake
Thinking about you
Wondering where you are
Then I wish upon a star
That I was there too.

I find myself daydreaming all the time
Wishing that you were still mine
Hoping it would be the same again.

Then it all becomes so clear
You were always distant and never near
She has your heart now and she had it then
Now I realize that what we had was...
JUST A GAME OF PRETEND.

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 11-15-2007 03:56 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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mandamaywhoviay
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2 posted 01-02-2009 11:32 AM       View Profile for mandamaywhoviay   Email mandamaywhoviay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mandamaywhoviay

Very nice ending! Your poem is really relatable and I like that.
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