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Broken Heart |
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neunagirl New Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 7Belton, MO U.S.A. |
I want to talk to you but I don't know how, I want to be with you but I can't feel you now. It is time for me to move on, but yet I'm still not over you. I still think about everything you say and do. I want you in my life but I don't know how, The only way to have you in my life just tears me down. I've cried so much and I've hurt so bad, I'm still not over feeling sad. We had our fun and we had our pain, I wonder if I'll ever love again. I know I'll never give them my heart Because my first love just tore it all apart. How can I still love you When lying to me was the only thing you knew how to do? It's not about trust being broken It's about how you were never ever open. I gave you my all I didn't hold back. And now I'm here with a broken heart, that's where I'm at. So I'll move on, I'll try to be strong, And I won't think about a love that was so wrong. |
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orpheus Junior Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 30Portugal |
Every poem written with such passion moves me, no matter the way you do it. Well done! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Nicely done! I can feel the emotion. ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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