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Finding Bliss |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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When I looked into your eyes I forgot the other guys And when your lips caress mine I feel our souls intertwine When I kiss your whole face It feels so soft, fine as lace I love to behold you sleep In your mind I'd like to creep I'd love to know what you hold What secrets you've never told Love to know your thought and dreams There is more to you than there seems Like a book that's never read There's so much more in your head With every day I learn more And higher my heart does soar I love you more with each day I know I took the right way You and I are so brilliant There's nothing more I could want |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Very nice piece, caught my eye right away. ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Thank you very much for your comment. |
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