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Robert Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 20sunrise,fl,usa |
we sometimes know too much, that we shoulnt say, i know. i met God today, my hands were like a translucent dream, my blood flowed through internal streams, as i saw it, i thought i was dying, my mind let go and my soul went flying, THEN I LOOKED INSIDE TO WHAT WAS LOOKING OUT, TO SEE INSIDE, FROM THE INSIDE OUT, it was scary but i understood it well, i know so much that i'll never tell, the answers are in the windows, look into the windows, we find things there, we should never say, i know. i met God today, I LOOKED INSIDE TO WHAT WAS LOOKING OUT, TO SEE INSIDE, FROM THE INSIDE OUT. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Robert, This is a really deep poem, and it really makes me think. Thank you, it's a wonderful piece of work just like your others. You really have talent! |
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Robert Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 20sunrise,fl,usa |
your very welcome. |
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DarkAngel0 New Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 7Brick, NJ, USA |
That is a great poem! I LOVE IT! i was reading your other poems they are also great! U R A GREAT POET!!!!! |
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ILoveJ Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 16Eugene, Or, US |
This is a very well done poem and I'm sure that all of your others are just as well written. One thing I must know is if you truely found God? |
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Ashley2405 Junior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 28West Columbia, South Carolina 29170 |
that was really great. it's very deep and beautiful. ------------------ *})i({*Ash*})i({ |
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