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mandas_1
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since 1999-07-15
Posts 5
Irving,TX. USA

0 posted 1999-07-15 01:13 AM


Onto the sea I sailed my boat
And prayed it would stay afloat
From dawn til dusk;from dusk til dawn
In search of love I drifted on
What happened then I dont recall
I think it was a sudden squall
For when I awake I thought i'd died
At the sight of an angel at my side
But luckily for me that was not true
For i'd found love and love was you

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heaven_0401
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 19
Australia
1 posted 1999-07-15 04:29 AM


poem was great,
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-07-15 07:17 AM


Very nice piece, I'm not one for the Light, but I liked it nonetheless.

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