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Ashlie693 Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 25 |
IT is a liar. Trapping people of all ages into its cunning trap. IT is a hammer. Breaking the hearts of our loved ones, who can only pray that we can someday see what they do. IT is a crook. Robbing us of the right to make the right decisions, breaking apart familys, and taking our minds away. IT is sly. Working its way slowly into our lives, until we center ourselves around it. IT is among us. Every day, we see posters, magazine ads, signs, commercials, promoting it. IT is EVIL. Only causing hurt and pain, only out to destroy. IT is Alcohol. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Alchohol has effected my family in numerous ways, it even contributed to my parents divorce. It is evil and it should not be glorified as it is. This is a great poem and it really tells a truth about an evil that has been plaguing our society. Great poem. Can't wait to see more. |
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MysticWizard Junior Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 14 |
This is a great poem. You speak the truth about alchohol. Alchohol is bad... VERY bad. Your poem is good. VERY good. |
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