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katrina
Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A

0 posted 1999-07-14 09:24 PM


Everything is random.
All of the sex on T.V.
makes me wonder
what is happening to us,
we've gotten to the point that we can't even think anymore.
And if we all stood together
maybe we could change the world.

This poem is about the hope that I have, even though it can be so hard to have hope when all you see is hate most of the time. The message I have for everyone is : Be nice to everyone! It will only make the world a better place for us all. :0)

© Copyright 1999 katrina - All Rights Reserved
Talia
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 25
Colorado Springs, CO, USA
1 posted 1999-07-15 12:53 PM


Great message, great poem, good work.
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