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MysticWizard
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since 1999-07-14
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0 posted 1999-07-14 04:52 PM


Your beauty is without words
For I cannot begin to describe
This love I feel for you inside

You make me feel happy,
You make me feel loved
For you do not judge, you only love

I never knew what living was,
Till knowing you opened my eyes and heart
to all things the world offers

For you see the REAL me
The me that most dont get to see
For they dont stay as long, and take the time to get inside, the REAL me

I am writing this for you
To barely begin to describe,
The love I feel for you inside

© Copyright 1999 MysticWizard - All Rights Reserved
Ashlie693
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 25

1 posted 1999-07-14 05:05 PM


Very good poem!!! Kepp up the great work!!!
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-08-09 02:19 AM


Nice job, keep up the good work!

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*Krista Knutson*

"Your kiss upon my face feels like a brush with grace, baby thats all it takes to take me higher..." SHeDaisy

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