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invertigo18 Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53Prairieville, LA., USA |
Whispering Eyes I felt for so long Like I was talking to the wind Was I wrong? Was it pretend? Hope of a new dawn From rays of your love That must be there In the air above Entranced and held up By your’ whispering eyes. That, tell everything Your mind derives. Is it a dream? Could it be true? Could it be? That finally you… Could rip the velvet night in two With the touch of a love Coughed from the heart Of a shadowmind dove Inflamed and burned up By your whispering eyes That tear up When your soul cries Cry for me A friend in need For your love My heart bleeds ------------------ Luke Cakalic |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
ooh, I like this a lot, invertigo. As always, you have incredible imagery and it was wonderfully written. I applaud you! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
AAaaahhh, I knew it, someone else is a fan of your imagery that you paint. Krista is a very fine poet, that's why she also appreciates your work! I'm still digging in this vault to dust off more of your work and send them back to the top where they belong! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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